Tuesday, April 28, 2009

The Evening Pair

The sky surfer sets to set
Ending the tale of the day
Beloved ocean is all inviting
On horizon doors rainbow sway

Evening sky is red with envy
And the clouds are on fire
As the sun drowns in her arms
For a evening by flying choir

The lights dim for the evening
Love permeates the air umpteen
As the celestial adornes the pristine
With a necklace of golden sheen

As her heart misses a beat
Her expanse belittled by her joy
Mushy eyes give into tides high
And veil of waves hides the coy

Smitten she suddenly takes heed
of eavesdropping by giggling stars
Abashed, pull up the waves, but
Billows gives away the lover's wars

Blushing the sun rises from the sea
To take to task the stars naughty
Hither-thither the moon runs to hide
Stars dissolve with the whole party

"Morning" Says the sun lovingly
with his caress of rays infinite
As she begins to wake up, clad,
beautiful, only in necklace's light.

One of my friends once asked me, "Why do I only have painful thoughts to share?" I wondered, smiled, nodded and said, "next I will write a happy prayer."... Here it is.

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12 comments:

P said...

nice happy prayer :)

dheer said...

waah! tum kab se likhne lage dost! gud-gud. tumhaaree english poems kaafee achchhee hai. kuchh lines meree samajh naheeN aayee [meree english kaisee hai woh to tuu jaantaa hee hai :)].
and teree urdu-hindi poems so-so hai kyoN'k jaisee meree angrejii hai waisee teree urdu . hahahaha
tata.
Dheeraj Ameta
http://www.dheer.webs.com

Wishy said...

Your vocab is reaching nice standards...good going ...

Anonymous said...

Wonderful write..i read it again and again
-sindhu

Student for life said...

Thanks Sindhu... its a pleasure to have you here!

Sonal said...

Beautiful prayer, thanks for writing an happy stuff.

Moreover with few lines i can imagine it in real!!

Keep writing

Student for life said...

Yeah, so real and yet so fleeting!

autumn leaves said...

really a nice happy prayer:)

autumn leaves said...

really a nice happy prayer:)

Student for life said...

Thanks Payal... glad you liked it

Vivek Jain said...

Depth of thoughts seen less often..

Student for life said...

Thanks Vivek :)

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